Well, looks like Zeus won’t be brought to justice tonight. Very good entry into this challenge. I really enjoyed the story, but I’m a sucker for serial killers.

Good repeat of the wail description from the other ficlet. So, a suicide-inducing device? That would be dastardly. Great job on the challenge. Kind of fun to see the different mixes on order we’ve all used for the challenge (ie, yours goes 2-1-3, mine goes 3-1-2).

Great job on the challenge! I like how each part links directly to another, via certain descriptions or bits of dialogue, allowing the reader to piece it all together in the end.
LoA

Yet more murderous thoughts from a lot of Ficleteers. You guys are scaring me…