These stories seem to be out-of-order.

Even more money for our hero now that both of his accomplices are dead. Although, I’m guessing this won’t end well for him. And you did a good job of the misdirect from the first one where we thought they might get away safely.

Very exciting continuation of the story, though I’m still laughing at the comment from I’m-THAT-Guy! Heck of a twist, certainly suggests something having happened on the upper deck. Brutal stuff.

LOL at the first comment. You’d think he’d take the time to read the title, too.
LoA

Wow, these are great!

THAT Guy is my brother…he’s giving me a hard time because of a comment I left on one of his stories.

Thanks for the encouragement, all!

Nice one…now we’re getting into even the more exciting bits, if possible.