Similar to your “shooting shadows” ficlet, and just about as good. I especially like the “breathless mother is holding back a letter in America” line.
Very good Tad. Good View into a soldiers point of view. Btw, your team (Celtics) are hot tonight!LoA
I agree with Stovohobo. That was a good line. :) It’s all deep, man. Nice metaphors, this is all-around awesome. I see a sequel opportunity, perhaps similar with the other side of the combat? Just sayin’. Also, nice subject choice. =)
I agree with Stovohobo. That was a good line. :)
It’s all deep, man. Nice metaphors, this is all-around awesome. I see a sequel opportunity, perhaps similar with the other side of the combat? Just sayin’.
Also, nice subject choice. =)
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