Oh Bravo! And thanks for writing a prequel :-)

I particularly like the God and rattle riff – really evocative imagery there. applause

Lovely job giving a more concrete, grounded prequel to Maleghast’s stunned and disoriented piece. Hilarious bit with the intercom not quite turned off.

Excellent story stovo. I fly frequently but will never feel comfortable during turbulance. I like how you make the passengers (and readers) feel uneasy through the captains mistake. And the way you reveal the condition of the weather and the reason to worry with dialogue is skillful and crafty.