Unfortunate shorts.

Five thousand for a Ford Taurus.

Titles? We don’t need no stinkin’ titles!

Funny, sir. Good bit :)

You’ve got a typo there in the first paragraph: “had the duffel in my his right hand.” I think his needs to go.
Another great addition to this story. I’m really hoping you continue it.

Nice catch, John…edited.

I had written this in the 3rd person and, when I reread the series, realized everything else was 1st person from Jim’s perspective. So, I rewrote it to match…missed that pronoun.

I’m glad you continued this. This has some very natural-sounding dialogue and great suspense.

Ohhh, it’s all coming together. I like the way you present what could be a very confusing story when told out-of-order, but instead is a nice, suspenseful string.