I like that you gave the ship’s AI a personality. Overall, very good job of communicating the scene. I like it very much.

Thanks John, I wanted her to come off as quirky and fun.

This one evoked Andromeda images for me. This whole series has so far been very well written. And as Tad commented earlier, the dialog is getting better all the time. Keep ‘em coming!
LoA

Well Pyro I didn’t think about it when wrote it but… yeah it does sort of have a Andromeda feel to it.
Before my first Ficlet posted here, I’d never tried to write a story so this is a totally new experience for me. The ONLY reason that I have/am improving is thanks to everyone that has given me such priceless advice here.
My most sincerest thanks to you all.

I’m really surprised that this is your first dabbling into writing fiction, Kev. The first few posts were rough, but you’ve really settled into a solid style that’s working for you, and like I’ve said, is pulling us in deeper and deeper. Keep up the great work!

I agree with the others this keeps getting better and better and giving the ship A.I. and the way Ker interacts with that A.I. is done very well.