the title captured my interest. Will this go anywhere i wonder?
Interesting premise. And it was a very intriguing title. Well written. I approve.
selling germans huh.. Hitler would roll over in his grave.great job,very intriguing, reminds me of the scene in Planet of the Apes.
hmmmmm…. where will this go to?
wow. interesting. sounds like slavery but now and with germans. im sort of wondering why u picked germans.lol
Wow, a very close-up view of what’s happening in some bizarre world where this could happen. Is it some dark corner of ours or one of your imagining. Great job staying tight and with the emotions of the character.
check out http://humanpets.com/ – this idea is not novel.LoA
Great Start to this series!
PyroPunk – Um – no, slavery is not exactly a new, original idea. Not to be defensive (I guess I sound that way).
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