Wow, bravo! It is kind of a poem and has a certain rythm and flow to it. Awesome job!
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it reads kind of like a rap…i dont know whether it was intentional or not, but i like it.

OMG awesome job! I know a person exactly like that! Six feet under the stars is right, it does sort of read like a rap, but a REALLY good rap.

OMG awesome job! I know a person exactly like that! Six feet under the stars is right, it does sort of read like a rap, but a REALLY good rap.