Solid continuation, kept right in the style of the previous pieces. Nice job setting a mood and tone.

Actually, this is barely any different than what I would’ve written. Great coninuation.

Great scene, for some reason houses with brick walls and iron gates have always scared me. I think you missed an ‘h’ in the third sentence, when the guard is lowering his head.

Thanks for pointing that out JMSquire. Not sure how I missed it. I had to remove a comma to get it to fit though.