I really like this and am eagerly set to read on. One minor thing… The first half of this is crisp, giving you the feeling that every word is just how it should be, but toward the end there are several misspellings and mistakes like of the this battle and luck he never wish he have. Back to the things I loved, I need to know more about these terrible Southlanders, so I’m reading on!

I agree with tbs. It looks like you got really into your story and didn’t stop to proofread at the end. Otherwise it’s great.