Haha.. great ending!!
here’s wishing my wife tells me the same thing in a week or two!

love it.

Peter: [jaw-drop]

Beautifully told. Well built suspense.

I loved it so much – I actually wrote a sequel!

My heart was on parade and she possessed the dagger that would open a wound the likes of which I’d never felt before> great line.
I like the Shatner type thoughts. She. Is. breaking.up.with . Me.

I like how you added the element of suspense.. with the internal thoughts. Then threw in a twist at the end. Nicely done.

I like how you added the element of suspense.. with the internal thoughts. Then threw in a twist at the end. Nicely done.

this was really good. I love the girl’s name ;)
LoA

Brilliant. Precisely what this challenge needed.