I think the idea of this can be made into a nice ficlet, but I just can’t get all of it through the grammar, spelling, spacing, etc. issues. Spaces between the commas would help, and periods could be put in place of some of them. Paragraph breaks between dialogue, run-ons, stuff like that. If it was fixed up a little, it could be a really good ficlet. Hope I didn’t sound too jerkish, but that’s just what I think.
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P.S. Love “House”!

Thanks for your opinion and no, you didnt jerkish or least you didnt to me