Hmm, this reminds me of Edward’s struggle with Bella. He’s so much stronger than she is, she’s so breakable. I like how’ve you’ve applied it to a creature who is normally seen as invinceible (vampire) and a creature that has never been heard of before Great job!

I know, this is remarkably similar… I’ve been reading way too much Twilight recently. I keep catching myself using her phrases… all though, in retrospect, I doubt anyone reads it enough to notice, except me, obviously. I read at least a chapter a day. Usually I just skip randomly about to my favorite parts. I’m totally addicted.

I read enough to notice… lol =)

well darn, let me know if I start doing it again.