That was good, hopefully it will become a series! great job! I loved the description of the calmnity of the moment.

Wonderful beginning; I’ll sequel now. (Sorry, I’ve been AWOL from ficlets for the past two or three days).

Amazing rescue.

You did a nice job of setting up these characters here. Her selfishness really shines through in that not only is she killing herself, but causing a car wreck in the process, which might kill many others. Good way to quickly add depth.