WOW ! Blown away Jenunique… Rats, we must have posted our stories at exactly the same time or I would have chained off of yours, I think I’ll delete my post and add it to this one.
No the use of Becky was fantastic… and a perfect tie in. I hope you continue to add to the story. Your post has added another layer of richness that I would have never thought of.
Interesting twist bringing other time travelers into the story. I like it very much. And good touch with the bit about looking at her phone to check the time.
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