Alex is most definitely a robot. I’m sure of it. You used “than” twice in the first paragraph when it should have been “then.” Other than that, nice addition. Good description of the teacher.
I love how you described the teacher. Especially with the glasses. And how you described the students as they appeared to him as a mass of gawking faces clouded in ignorance. one question although, why was the teacher so upset? What was causing his face to be all twisted in a sneer?
To the students the teachers smile looks like a sneer, he’s assuming they are all ignorant and that he has the answers to all their questions… so his smile looks a bit derisive I guess
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