Don’t know if I brought this in too early, but you can always go back and sequel differently if you wish.

Whoa, that was intense but an awesome visual. Definitely big budget summer movie sort of action-packed, mind-numbingly cool climax.

“But then, suddenly, the entire room was still. The fire froze and cracked down to the ground. The skylights above shattered and rained down millions of shimmering fragments that fell around all in the room. Every human was struck by a feeling of pure, simple perfection and each fell down to the ground, clasping their arms over their faces.”
Now thats a paragraph! I love how you described the skylight shattering, And the effects of the rival forces between good and evil. Well done!

I love this! I just made a comment yesterday about Satan and his weakness. Haven’t read the previous entries, now I must. ;) This is great!

You do get serious points for a fantastic title, but I think that this is a bit too abrupt. I’m not sure I have the ability to actually do anything about it, I just think it’s a bit too abrupt.

:) Alexa

Woot!

Satan is dead!

…

Or is he…?