wow, powerful piece John. You’ve really got the “child like psychopath” feel nailed.

I agree very powerful. I love the description of Voltron. You did a great job.

Really really good! My favorite line? “His face is littered with the railroad tracks of stitched scars from a previous life as an asshole.” Love it!

i love the way you describe vinny.. Very creative. Humerous descriptions. This is a really witty story.

Ahh… This is pretty good. I kinda get the feel that the main character might be young…or seemingly young in mind. When I read Voltron, I instantly got the idea that this character was was different, more evil and crueler than the other staff members and his description made him someone I really couldn’t find myself being comfortable around.
But all in all, this is very good and I did enjoy it.

Haha!

This was great!

I loved this! her simple phrasing, thought process, and how you stuck to that childish way of speaking was awesome!

The way she describes it as if she was just at summer camp is simply priceless.

This ficlet was out of this world, I was actually a little afraid of the character when I finished. I like the railroad tracks line, too. And how you said smooshed. I smiled.