Slight grammatical mishaps throughout the series, but otherwise fantastic. Hope you sequel soon!
Here’s a quick mini-lesson:
1.you’re: use this as a contraction for “you are.”
ex.: You’re mine, scoundrel!
2. your: use this as a possessive pronoun.
ex.: “Your eyes are resplendent.”
3. “they’re: use this as a contraction for “they are.”
ex.: “They’re getting away!”
4. *their: use this as a possessive pronoun.
ex.: “Their expressions were ridden with guilt.

Hope this helps!

I concur with Ana, who reads a little bit faster than me apparently (though I did have a 20 minute phone call in there somewhere)… Some grammar and spelling issues, but the series is one of my favorites on ficlets and you simply must continue soon!!!!!!!