Oh man, it killed my comment. Eh, oh well. In any case, another good job here. I did find it surprising that you didn’t do more with the shop or mirrors. Not that it’s a bad thing, it just felt like Jen may have had bigger plans for the place. But that’s the thing about this sort of collaboration. The story is constantly evolving in places you never thought it would go.
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