awesome series. an allegory it seems..The specter of communism. love well told zombie stories. this is one of the best.

Another excellent entry to a very surreal series. One note though. The phrase “the inflating corpse of the once-landscaping fallen Zombie Karl Marx,” feels a little forced. I think it’s the “once-landscaping” part that really messes it up for me. Not sure it’s needed.

I’d agree with John Perkins. I think it has too many adjectives that confuse the reader. I only say that, of course, because I can’t really find any other flaws – so good job.

Good points, I forced myself to write those sentences hoping they might add to the humor… but you’re right, they are confusing. I’ll see if I can clean ‘em up. Thanks!
LoA

There, does that read better?
LoA

Must have worked, cause I thought it plain rocked. Then again, I’m a big, unruly, overactive, pedantic fan of superfluous, rambling, idiosyncratic adjectives.

I agree with THX . It rocked!

The sequels must continue! I’m a little disappointed that there hasn’t been another one in a while. What’s going to happen next?

I’ll probably keep it going, I’ve just been on a Ficlets break for a couple days, getting caught up with some other stuff. :-) Keep checking back here!

I loved the specter of communism.