this begs for sequels.. well drawn characters.

Niiiccce. That little hint at the end really opens it up to some amazing possibilities.

There’s a thingy… theory that says JtR was a mason. it’s weird. Anyway. Good story, maybe the guy’s a masonic killer? Maybe it was a prostitute? Dunno. Just my ideas. Loved it!

Grrr…. Now I’m sucked into the suspense….

Great scene, lots of hinting and a bit…romantic or something?

This was a really promising start, very compelling characters. One minor correction: where you write: I just want to know if your worth defending, it should be “you’re” instead.

Yeah, Ana, I caught another one where I did that earlier. Apparently I just paid no attention to that while writing this ficlet, and I’m a stickler for editing myself.