ohhh shit hahaha

Oh snap! Kevin. Great twist at the end. Still some grammar stuff but the structure was better. Great development to the story.

This was great. I luv it. Some spelling mistakes but still really gooood (:

love the idea, but please put the conversation in quotes, it makes reading much easier.

next your sopposed to read the story by smile4life

OMG … that is something that would happen to me!