awesome i really used to live in that same apartment it really did suck i love this

On the run thye are.. seedy appartment, great story

I like the sentence about them not understanding the concept of work and money. (By the way, there are two sequels for this that have already been written by someone else. I told them they could post them, and if we can’t work with them we can always sequel differently. That’s what ficlets is about, right? Sorry, I’ve been AWOL from ficlets.)

hey i wrote some sequels to this let me know if i made the plot too vague and ill make another to clarify i love how well yall developed anna and jared

“Once the tear ceased” should be plural. Great work otherwise!