as before, ideas good, but writing could use some work. for example, if a guy asks you to prom, he wouldn’t say that u were cheating on him unless you were going out with him. and if their supposed to be going out, you need to clarify that. also, she wouldnt randomly realize hes a jerk just from that one moment. try to be realistic in ur writing

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you have to read the one by smile4life

you have to read the one by smile4life