Very nice idea, or perhaps reinterpretation of Hunchback of Notre Dame. I like the style and the look into his brain. But I might just add space breaks in between paragraphs. It makes it a lot more accessible to random readers.

Thanks… I’m planning on the person being a girl; and thanks for the suggestion. I’ll see to it right now.
~lpi

i like it. is it an interpretation of hunchback of notre dame? cuz if so, there is a lot u can do with that.

I’ve never seen Hunchback, so it could turn out to be an interpretation of it… I’ll have to let those who aren’t under a cultural rock (like I am, regretably) decide how similar it is.