creepy music plays Noooooo! I knew nothing good could happen.

Good job continuing the ficlet series of the wonderball. Everyone that’s working together on this is doing an amazing job.

:-D Thanks; I’m not usually a thriller person, but apparently I did good… Good job to everyone else who’s been working on this story!

amazing!!

omg, does he want her heart to live of something??? great job!

I’m not sure what “the man” wants… I’m leaving that to someone else down the road ;-)

Wow. This is awesomely creepy. Good job.
LoA

Ok, so any questions I had about Wonderball’s intent have been answered. Thanks, guys. : )

Wow, that’s a freaky ending. What’s he been waiting for?

Oooh, maybe she’s being transferred into the Wonderball? Or maybe I’m totally delusional – either way, good ficlet.

Definitely creepy take into an entirely different direction. I like how everyone is continuing the back and forth between the two girls despite one being unable to speak.

Whats complete!??!

what happened to the wonderball…?

WHATS ALMOST COMPLETE ?!!?!!!
WHO IS THIS GUY ? IS HE THE WONDERBALL ???
HOLY FRICKING CRAP !!!!!!
SOOOO INTENSE !!!
SOOOO SCARY !!!!!!!!!

Hey, you wanna know what happens next… ya gotta keep reading ;-)

oh wow.
just…
wow.

Geez, I feel wicked important, what with everyone saying how awesome this thing is! :-D Thanks everyone; glad I could help move this puppy along. (and I never thought I could write creepy, but apparently I did well with it…)

hey!! wow!! I never knew you could write such a good SCARY story!! I love this story you gotta keep writing to this story!! The supense is killing me to know what is going to happen next! I am going to keep reading. =]