I think it should be “Pack were winning.” Also, is there a continuity error having June be the one who pipes up saying ok?

Other than that, excellent little series. Definitely a spectacular entry into the challenge. It was an exciting read. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Very cool stuff, Ben. Very well put together, very Out of Order, all in all an excellent read!

@John – The continuity shift was intentional. I wanted June’s financial desparation to push them toward the robbery and have misgivings later.

@JLaughter – Thanks…it was a lot of fun and a departure for me.

Ah, ok. That makes sense.

Ah, excellent “beginning” to the story arc, so by the title, I’m assuming this is also the “ending”?

@Kev – Yessir…this is it. Finito.

Kind of a bummer that it’s over, but definitely a superb entry into this competition. I’ve said it before, but it bares (bears?) repeating, you really manhandled this challenge. I figured anyone could put something up, but making it good would be a challenge. You made it look easy, and kept us all very entertained the whole time.

Wow. Perfect ending. Beginning. Beg-end-ing, like you said. The last words make me shiver.