Brandi… you are such an amazing writer, and i dont think you know how good you are… I love it, especially Jack’s personality =)

brandi, brandi, brandi, wow this is amazing!!!!! i love stories when the guy is all protective and stuff, its soo romantic!!!!. you definatly need to keep writing this, if this became a novel, it would give Twilight a run for its money, and you know how much i adore Twilight. i might actually love Jack Dunn as much as i do Edawrd Cullen. DID I REALLY JUST SAY THAT ?? yes i did. =)=)=)=) keep writing!!!!!!!

Edward*

wow… brandi this series was freakin amazing!!! u’ve always been an amazing writer and this just proves it even more!!! u really need to write a novel =))))

I agree with Thomas. You keep telling me this is bad. I don’t think it is.
It’s just something different. Everyone’s different.
But anyways, good sequel.
Really shows the emotions of Jack a lot.
I probably sound like a nerd now. lol.

awwww!!!! all you guys just made my day!!! love all you! =)

I have to agree.
I reallly enjoy this.
You got a good story here[:
andd no idiots sequeled it either :D