Wow. I’m blown away. Its like you were looking inside of my head when I was writing the prequel and found those feelings I couldn’t find the words to express and put them here. You did a fabulous job. My fave part was “This is an outlet. If I spill these thoughts, if I bleed enough onto paper, can I get your essence out of my blood?”. Seriously awesome Ficlet. Words cannot express what this makes me feel. Great, great job.

I agree the captain, very well done. And it flows very nicely from the previous ficlet, using a similar stream of consciousness approach and style.

wow..very nicely written…kinda my life story..anyway..awesome job