Wow, that is one great lead into a kiss. That was very suave.

I agree with Krulltar. Very good job on leading into the kiss and describing everything else. The imagery was very vivid.

I love the rundown of his thoughts that led (FINALLY!!!) to that magical first kiss he’s been thinking about all week. I can’t wait to sequel!

You have sequel (I couldn’t resist yet another 80’s song reference)

Fun and cute. If I was in a darker mood, I might feign gagging, but this was just really sweet.

YAY !!!! As you can probably tell, I’m really happy about Jameson and Prandi.
Excellent job.

aww they finally kiss.. good for them. Im starting to like them even more. I kinda figgured they would end up together, it was just a matter of time.