Awesome! I miss the days when you and kwatz would pump out like six of these in a day. Although, I fully understand the lack of ideas thing. I’m usually really good at starting stories, but horrible at finishing them. Not sure why. In any case, I really liked this entry. You did add an “d” to “human” in the first line. Other than that though, very cool entry. I absolutely enjoyed it.
So I have something written as a sequel to this but I’m not sure I want to publish it. I don’t know if it’ll fit. I just really want this story to continue or wrap up as the case may be.
Seriously, Rain Dance, if you have a sequal, by all means, go for it! I seem to have run out of ideas, but I’m definately looking forward to renewing this series and perhaps a new voice will help to just that.
Not to discourage anyone from contributing to this thread (by all means, revive it! – I’d love to see where you take it) but if you follow the link to my blog, I’ll shortly (within a couple of days) begin posting a complete novella I wrote based on my interpretation of this story. If you enjoyed my contributions on this site, I hope you’ll stop by my blog and read my interpretation.
[pens&feathers]
John Perkins
Amaster
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RainDance
RainDance
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kwatz
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