I think I’ve got at least two more in this series, possibly three or four though. I’ll try to get them up tomorrow. Also, I apologize for the overuse of the word “darkness.” I had a heck of a time getting these two to fit into the alloted space, and had to make some tough compromises.
This is great, I like how a stranger in the darkness is calling him ‘dude’ and trying to calm him down. I know if someone started talking to me from the darkness in a never ending plane of bamboo my fears would NOT be relieved at all.
Thanks for the comments guys. I’m glad you enjoyed it even though it suffers from some sub-standard writing. I’ll try to punch it up a little in the next few. @Pyro, I’m going to guess that this leads exactly where you expect. Especially given the challenge. Though, hopefully you’ll still be entertained along the way.
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