Wow. This is amazing. It actually gave me a hollow feeling inside while reading! Very good, keep writing!

Awesome stuff, really stunning scene and the clashing emotions are perfect. Chilling, really.

I was reading this and my “a Pimp Named Slick Back” bobble head was reading over my shoulder(don’t you hate when people read over your shoulder), and i thought the story was vivid. However,a Pimp Named Slick Back said the white voice was Gandolph as the ghost of Christmas future tellin the ho’ she dont need to be eatin no food,if she ont’ get her a$$ back out in the snow and get A Pimp Named Slick Back’s money, won’t be no Christmas… I gotta get some new bobble heads, they were sold out of Ghandi & Jesus.

Very good story.