I like the way this was almost poetic, and very easy to relate. I kind of want a story to go along with it, though. You know?

I agree, poetic feel and very relateable. You’re right, you will have your chance. Just be patient.

I can totally relate to this right now. It’s so annoying and so easy to relate to that I almost thought I was reading my own mind.
Good job. I love it!
=)

I love it. Has a lot of meaning and I can also relate to it.
LoA