I totally got the pictures… but weirdly enough it seemed almost over-descriptive? Sometimes the word choice would throw me for a loop and I’d lose the picture. Great images though :)

Valley Fey/Pinprick has a point – they’re great images, but it feels a tad excessive in parts. Try breaking up the images into separate sentences and play with it until you find a combination that works. Overall, it’s still a stunning scene you’ve “painted.”

Thank you entering. I like the repetitive grass theme.