Intriguing last sentence.
And I can sympathize with your hero’s lack of coordination. I have horrible balance whether I’ve had a few or am completely sober.

Wow, I guess he really should have listened to the advice of his dealer. This just got really interesting, going beyond great dialogue to an intriguing story.

Heady, swirling series of events. The last line is intriguing, but it feels like it runs a bit.

Yeah, I think I rushed it a bit because I was hoping to get to be before 11pm, although that has now absolutely not happened. Also I had no idea how I was going to carry it on when I wrote that, hopefully the edit has helped.

Cool. I thought this was pretty funny: “the aniseed flames of the sambuca cascaded into my stomach, and almost cascaded out again”