I’m not sure I see the twist here. What am I missing? Does it have something to do with “Savari” that I don’t understand?

Saul is really a woman? He/she’s been masquerading as a man but has also had a relationship with Ash as the woman. Or he/she is a shapeshifter, maybe.

I’m with John and THX on this one. I have no clue what the twist is supposed to mean? But well written otherwise.

I think I got the twist. Nice action in this one, although the set-up to the twist is quite abrupt.

It was not your best, not your worst. I agree with the others; maybe the twist was a little abrupt, but I got it. Besides, twists are supposed to be sudden.

Yikes! Okay, I wanted it to be subtle, and somehow in your face: Savari is Saul. Savari is a woman. Past relationships have been hinted at, but not explained.

After a minute of thinking, I got it. Nice story. Were they fencing?