Haha funny! Thanks for sequeling!

I’m liking the dialogue, as it helps characterize the two.

oh see you got flair panash and what the french call madd skills. Use them your dialogue is good quircky and fresh approach your descriptive narrative with the same ferocity and drive for originality. some writers make cliches work but for you it just pisses me off because i know your mind makes way better ones than you read in bday cards you are something new under the sun