When you first introduced this guy, I immediately thought of the old man who died on the stall in “Clerks.” I think he starts his conversation with Dante in the exact same way.
Funny little twist there at the end, but now I’m left wondering if the dude is trying to rob someone else’s flat, or really wants to get into his own.

I love how the ending shows us what the character’s really up to. Either that, or maybe he left his handcuffs key with the other 14 keys inside his flat.

The twist made me chuckle. And that JP has a funny mind, doesn’t he? JK, “Clerks” is an awesome flick.

Cute little twist, but it fits with the character.

Comic relief! Loved the twist.

Haha really unexpected twist, always love british humour.

crazy did you just come up with that? or did that really happen to you?if so were you the guy at the shop or just ..maybe.. good story

Wow.. I kinda saw that coming.. I mean, who has 14 keys and locks ALL of them humm? lol. Nice twist though!
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i knew that guy was up to something .. heheh
Great stuff.

I liked this one. Nice understated humorous twist. And the dialogue was definitely from the top drawer, I found it flowed very smoothly and believably

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