Very realistic questions for someone to have in that kind of a situation! I like the use of repetition throughout. e.g.: Waiting for…
love it! This is a great ficlet! I can totally relate!
I ditto all the above. Very realistic, very relatable.LoA
Boys, they never call! I think you missed a single “I” in “I wonder if phase you.”. It’s not apparent because the line breaks there. Otherwise very well written and as Ana pointed out the repetition really lets you feel the longing.
is this a true story
♠Ana Cristina♥
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problematique <3
problematique <3