Ok that was like action packed and.. weird.. lol

I agree, weird. But cool. Some capitalization mistakes here and there that some proof-reading should take care of.

That was action-packed. Not exactly what I expected, but an exciting story nevertheless.

Proof positive that all children are evil, and should be destroyed.

“More blows than Jenna Jameson,” was very, very funny. 5 Stars just for that.
And I agree 100% with Jon. Just because we call it a fetus, doesn’t change the fact that it’s technically a parasite.

Yeahh uhhh how does this translate to a story about the dead. its supposed to be a ghost story.

Sarah i love your legaly blonde-style commentary please keep em coming they really do make me feel like a sub-genuis. but on a serious note, possession if possible is usually done by a ghost which could be a synonym for spirit, or demon, or angel, or djinn, so i figured it would qualify, but blondes do have more fun.