Huh. That took an unexpected turn. You set up the twist very well, and I’m happy to say that you took me by surprise! I had to reread both parts twice to make sure I had it right.

as you usual you always take chances that is what i love about your stuff

Very odd. This is one twisted honeymoon. Enjoyable read though, and some great descriptions.

Interesting extra twist here. The last line, as twisted as it is, kind of made me laugh.