I bow before your superior awesomeness in this series. From the chipmunks to the middle finger to the “oops, we stole a cop car.” Awesome through and through.
Don’t ask me why, but it made me think of the calvin and hobbes quote I got on my desk at work… “You know, Hobbes, some days even my lucky rocketship underpants don’t help.” I agree with the others,I love the your sequel.
Oh noes, you have armed the criminals. Great read, and adds a lot of excitement to the mix. But, I personally believe that the chipmunks are good any time of the year.
love the last line.. very comical and perfectly timed. Shes about to go down for GTA and yet shes worried about getting busted for not wearing a seatbelt. Too cool
This was a great read. Can’t wait to read on. “That’s what we get for jacking a car across the street from the police station.â? Laugh out loud worthy.
i really love how you set up the story with an air of innocence by mentioning the alvin and the chipmunks christmas tape in the cassette player, it makes the ending just as much of a surprise to us as it was for the main characters. great job. oh and sarah conrad i dont think she is worried about a seat belt ticket, i think the dialouge is ment to imply that it’s about to be a bumpy ride, you know like a high speed chase. just thought i’d clear that up for you.
I love this! ‘40 caliber Baretta, and a police badge’ is my favorite part. That is definatly the last two things you want to find when you steal a car!
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