This was a prophecy that was going to serve as a backstory to a fantasy story i was going to write.
I ended up dumping the whole thing, but i did keep my notes.

This is a bit of a re-write of the original.

Mmph. Wow. I don’t really know what to say to this, except: Good job.

I like this Fantasy is always fun to write n.n Great Job! 5/5

Very nice… like I said, free verse works pretty well. I don’t see why you didn’t use this for a big story, it’s good.
Thanks for entering!

hey i am not saying it isnt good because it is but you are a huge dork arent you? It’s good to see fellows dorks getting out even if it through the internet lol.

hahaha……
I’m a wee bit of a geek – let’s just put it that way! Geeky and proud!!! ;)
But i’m a musician too (play guitar and sing for two bands…) that helps me aclimate to the rest of society! Rawk!