Great dialogue. I love George’s sarcastic retort after being asked why he was in the office and his lecture about how to properly use a gun. Very practical stuff there. I’m loving the backwards unfolding of the series (I hope more people enter the challenge and do it as much justice as you have so far).

Another solid five star piece. Oh, and I agree with between on this one.

nice so far John! I’m loving this!! =) Thanks for entering, and you should really keep going.
LoA

What a great opening line in this. Although you could’ve done better than “poof” for the sound of a bullet tearing through someone. JK ;p

@Ana, Well, it was meant to be the sound of her silencer. Lost that detail in editing. But I thoroughly agree with you.