aww this is good!

note to readers: this one is actually not about the usual guy, another one this time :)

Hm… interesting. As usual, you wow me with you display of emotion. I love the indecision that you display throughout this piece.

On a grammatical note, I have a few corrections for you: Disappointed has only one s, overreacted is one word, and ‘shouldn’t of’ is commonly used in speaking, but it’s incorrect in writing. ‘Shouldn’t have’ is much better.

great job! Fantamonwoferous!
LoA

oh, and I meant interesting in a good way, not a bad way. lol.

this is good! =]

btw. sntoine is kenji ha ha ha

Not about the usual guy? Hmmm…..who? lol good job (: LoA