I know a pair of eyes like hers. Amazingly descriptive and tauntingly tiny in volume. Awesome job.

Brilliant, you know I love ficlets that highlight the eyes.

Wow Stovo, you really have a talent. “peeled him like an orange, revealing the bruised and ugly fruit underneath”

That juxtaposition of sweet, sunny orange actually being bruised fruit works exceptionally well.

Lovely, poetic stuff – and packed into such a small volume, too!

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It might be “microfiction,” but this short piece has so much depth to it. The imagery is fantastic.

Great Ficlet! I think I actually have one of those looks stored away in my basket of tricks. But, in defense of Jennifers everywhere, we don’t really mean to do it….. ;D Double stars for this one. (Of course, use of the name always helps.)

I’m really impressed with how you were able to fit such a deep story in only a few sentences. And I LOVE this line: “Her glance peeled him like an orange, revealing the bruised and ugly fruit underneath.” Great job, really.
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As always, some good stuff from Stovohobo. This was my favorite line: “He was good at hiding before she came, before those mirrored eyes taught him to see.”

i agree with amaster.
amazing stuff, and the last line was fantastic. :)
greattttttt job.
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