Aw. That made me feel so horrible for the bride. But then again thats the perpose, right? Great Job! I loved the lamb sacrafice thing!

Well a marriage without trust is… not good. I agree with Artist_girl, in that the sacrifice image is a great one!

Wonderful! Excellent descriptions. Thank you so much for entering!

I really felt the brides fears. I’m sad for her. I was sort of looking for the “happy” hook at the end, and was pleased when you left it just the way it was; full of questions and uncertainty!
Very well done!

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Gorgeous imagery here. I love how it begins and ends with the same line, which perfectly fits in with the mirror metaphor. There are not enough stars with which to rate this!

This is an awesome entry; the awful truth of unsure decisions, or an arranged marriage. I could really picture her running—maybe it’s my over reactive imagination there, but I have to agree with Ana Cristina. Awesome imagery!