My favorite moment was: “Click. Click. Click.” He looked up on the third click. It wasn’t from his camera. Fantastic detail.

Yeah, the details are great in this. They help cement what’s going on. Incredible that the pacing has been so consistent in this backwards series.

I agree with Between here… nice work on the click click click part.

very nice. I totally agree with Ana, good job with the pacing and details!
LoA

note to self, next time i am photographing documents pull out my equipment so they will believe it when i say, “this isnt a bathroom.”